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| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» toebee a répondu le Sat 20 Dec, 2003 @ 4:11pm |
 Coolness: 87130 | I find myself, eyes wide open
Just being that girl, that girl ive never seen, but always been. Doing the familiar things like breathing and observing. I couldnt ask for more, cause Im not stuck on the south shore. Eyes wide open, swallowing each detail locking the ugly ones in jail. Im smiling, Im smiling aware of the reason why Just swimming threw each situation I sleep for air. Even tho sometimes it feels like a burden even tho I know Im still learnin' Ive got thoughts Id like to share. I find myself, eyes wide open Just being that girl. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» caro a répondu le Fri 9 Jan, 2004 @ 2:06pm |
 Coolness: 152005 | as the weight of the world
rests upon my shoulders i begin to see that this world surronding me is not a happy place it's not covered in lace its full of lies i shut my eys and try to block it out but it finds it's way back back inot my mind like never ending time runing in circle's and never getting away a hole in the groud i have now found a bran new place for me to escape i curl into a ball and start to cry as a sigh of relife spreads over me for i am now free |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» cactain_steef a répondu le Fri 9 Jan, 2004 @ 2:13pm |
 Coolness: 154740 | with a knife in my hand,
my neck slips into the noose. but i cannot die because there simply isn't, a good enough excuse. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» michaeldino a répondu le Fri 9 Jan, 2004 @ 2:39pm |
 Coolness: 69040 | with my pants across the room
i jump to my doom? (hey its rhymes it MUST be poetry) |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» cactain_steef a répondu le Fri 9 Jan, 2004 @ 3:51pm |
| Coolness: 154740 | Hey, shut the fuck up!
(btw, it's poetry... ) Lol :P |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» michaeldino a répondu le Sat 10 Jan, 2004 @ 7:42pm |
| Coolness: 69040 | (in case you thought i was insulting your poem... i wasnt.. i was saying my own was gAy (with a capital A))
and onto other poems of disinterest... All I wanted I didn't get All I got I didn't want |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» flatlinedive a répondu le Sat 10 Jan, 2004 @ 10:26pm |
 Coolness: 63970 | the bliss, of this
is running through my fingertips tendrils of the winds caress all things shaped of nothingness let all of time condence to form a gravity of purpose and the scales of life balance out equating my worth lessons in outrunning the reaper on the fields of the dying spin me a web of all that i've lost to catch all that is left of me as i slip into memory |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» toebee a répondu le Thu 15 Jan, 2004 @ 1:41pm |
| Coolness: 87130 | close the book,shove the box
ignore their looks, close my mind with a lock enter the familiar place expecting to see no more books, but i still stand shocked Is this what it took, to put an end to our crazy absurd scenes? on my shoulder, you lean and I know that behind your closed eyes youre not seeing dreams I see the expression on your face, tasting this reality so bitter sweet. My hands are cold, so are my feet, frost covered bones wrapped in skin so weak surrounded by clones who multiply every week. How can I speak, when I'm captivated by what I see, see this line drawn to outline each body bolding their personality this is the point where I call my self crazy without worry, cause i dont mind cause all i really wanna be all I want is to be me. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Violence_Inc a répondu le Thu 15 Jan, 2004 @ 2:57pm |
 Coolness: 174155 | Another instance of dying,
Taken from the back of my disintegrated heart Crying rivers, crimson droplets disrupting the flow The path is struggling to reverse itself The lines running so deep their appearance invisible Till I ascend to the top from the bottom of this empty hole Surrounded only by thoughts of her, my weakness In the waters reflection, a thousand stars crying alongside me Another moment I’m wishing things were never taken away Maybe if I lay still, the sun will think I’m dead and no longer feed me light The last of empty strife will leave us murdered Ethereal visions of watching crystals break away from her face My heart still palpitates warmth even without you on my arm But my eyes haven’t been dry since the day I walked away We both knew we were being bled dry on each other’s thorns Why couldn’t we stop from choking on the blood? One more kiss to prove this is wrong… One more kiss to prove this is right… - killing the future so i can live in the past |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» caro a répondu le Thu 15 Jan, 2004 @ 3:10pm |
| Coolness: 152005 | my words are scrambled
my thought's are a mess everythins become a blur i've stoped caring nothing really matters my days are spent sitting on the same couch pondering my very exsistence why am i here? what am i doing? answers are never found leaving me to even question myself all i'm left with is my own madness |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Violence_Inc a répondu le Fri 16 Jan, 2004 @ 12:48am |
| Coolness: 174155 | To venerate in absence of direction
To venerate in absence of direction |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Suckballs_bebe a répondu le Fri 16 Jan, 2004 @ 12:43pm |
| Coolness: 66550 | Man this is like the no-no thread :S |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» beercrack a répondu le Fri 16 Jan, 2004 @ 12:49pm |
| Coolness: 71500 | beauty; health; socializing agents
(the things an anthropologist studies) the culture refined, in concepts; ancient civilization myths; through detailed field work, and armchair analysis - Record keeping of high symbolism The manifestation of progress archived and classified concentrated upon and contemplated in the mode, median, and mean Reduced to the essence It will but show in a fashion the magic of the moment |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» SpaceyTracy a répondu le Mon 19 Jan, 2004 @ 9:07pm |
| Coolness: 41755 | When I first saw you I felt so strange,
I didn't know what to say or how to feel, I didn't know what was wrong with my brain. My knees were weak, my courage was low, but I knew it and felt it, when we first said, "hello." You would be in my life, my hopes and dreams, that I would never want to see you leave. Your life so tender, your words so sweet, My heart sycronized with your hearts beat. We'd be together forever and ever more, and be happy from now, till the end of time. That hearign you go, will take the tears from your eyes to mine. Everytime we say hello, I never want to say goodbye. But when I must from dusk till dawn, I'll be thinking of you on and on. Your eyes so bright I hope you see, That no matter what, You'll always be more than a friend to me. No words can explain how I feel for you, but I will say this, that I Love You. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» caro a répondu le Fri 23 Jan, 2004 @ 3:09pm |
| Coolness: 152005 | relity such a bitch
this constant itch, a pain in my ass this horrid reminder that there's a world going on around me. i should stop to see i'm trully not free we are all stuck in this fake fucking fuck don't bother to duck you'll jsut get sucked back down you FUCK no freedom around not a single sound i'm all alone with no one to hold this place so cold no one to trust casue there's jsut no point in giving a damn so i'll hold your hand and we'll run away so we're finally happy.......... ..........Fuck. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» cloud9ine a répondu le Fri 23 Jan, 2004 @ 3:14pm |
 Coolness: 138785 | hey guys - try writing happy poetry. dont only write when yr down, try writing happy stuff too. the down stuff is (down)right too done. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» caro a répondu le Fri 23 Jan, 2004 @ 3:15pm |
| Coolness: 152005 | jsut for you jackie i'll write soemthign happy
but i personally only write cause it helps to get my anger out so i write when i'm sad or mad hence depressing poems....... meh' |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» cloud9ine a répondu le Fri 23 Jan, 2004 @ 3:17pm |
| Coolness: 138785 | aww thanks :)
its true tho, i do that too sometimes. definitely a good outlet for sad days/times. i remember in a poetry class i took, i got in shit cause all my poems were too sad. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Screwhead a répondu le Fri 23 Jan, 2004 @ 3:22pm |
 Coolness: 685655 | I love life and life loves me.
I'm as happy as can be. A happier man nowhere exists. I think I'll go and slit my wrists. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» caro a répondu le Fri 23 Jan, 2004 @ 3:31pm |
| Coolness: 152005 | awww fred SMILE!!!!!!!
pour ma gurl toby: what would i do without a friend like you? someone who's always there to wipe away my tears and chase away my fears a bathroom moment and it's all ok i'll be ready for a new day you there to hold my hand when times get rough thank god for you or i would have never gotten through you understand when no one else can all those lovely walks and neccesary talks you can make me smile even if only for a while so i thank you now for i have trully found someone who's alwayz there when i need them to be. |
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