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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» clown replied on Wed Aug 31, 2011 @ 12:48pm
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hey all, just put together something and wanted to know what you guys think !! does that wind-sound get too annoying?? is the kick okay ??

here's the link : [ www.rave.ca ]

it's kinda progressive with slight electro influences. very simple tune.

thanks in advance.
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» databoy replied on Tue Sep 20, 2011 @ 6:29pm
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Nice work. I like when the toms kick in, and that glitchy thing at the end is pretty cool. Unfortunately, I believe parts of that riff are off pitch with your bassline.
Imo, your bassline needs a bit of work. I donno, seemed a little stiff and could use a little groove,
It would be nice to hear a lead synth come in at some point to accompany your bassline.
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» AlienZeD replied on Wed Sep 21, 2011 @ 2:47am
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the white noise wind has has too much low end, and is too loud... the rest is pretty smooth
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» FRANKB replied on Wed Sep 21, 2011 @ 2:10pm
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stick a compressor on the master. you'll have a better outcome of the track renderd.
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» nothingnopenope replied on Wed Sep 21, 2011 @ 2:15pm
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High end seems a bit searing, did you boost it on the track or mix?
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» FRANKB replied on Thu Sep 22, 2011 @ 12:45am
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sourcream
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» clown replied on Wed Sep 28, 2011 @ 12:55pm
clown
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thanks for feedback guys.. yeah, that wind thing is WAY too loud.. i didn't have a handel on the volume control and finally found it and fixed that part.. as for the bassline groove.. humm.. yeah, i see what you mean. make it change up a little more often and sound less repetitive ?

as for the glitchy thing at the end being off-pitch.. i'll look into that as i didn't realise that one..

thanks again for listening and for all your input.. i'll work on it some more. :)
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