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| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» PonChalice replied on Thu Sep 4, 2008 @ 7:09am |
 Coolness: 76485 | |
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| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Mike_Stinger replied on Thu Sep 4, 2008 @ 11:17am |
 Coolness: 51470 | bullit! |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» PonChalice replied on Thu Sep 4, 2008 @ 3:51pm |
| Coolness: 76485 | :D |
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| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Teblchple7 replied on Sat Sep 6, 2008 @ 11:21am |
 Coolness: 44505 | A few distortion and phasing problems with your bass, but an excellent track none the less.
Good counts, good tension, good atmosphere/sonic palette. Most improved ribbon goes to you. Maybe 2009 is your year? |
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| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» PonChalice replied on Sat Sep 6, 2008 @ 3:39pm |
| Coolness: 76485 | thanks guys!
those where a couple of ruff loops that i wanted to elaborate on, so here's the 90% (or something like that) finished product: [ www.divshare.com ] ... so i have two baselines running over each other at points, im pretty sure thats the phasing and distortion your talking about. Its not as bad in this version because the notes dont very octives as much and dont hit as frequently. Im not sure how fix this yet, but im goig to try some side chaining, i guess ??? thanks for listening! pon Update » PonChalice wrote on Sat Sep 6, 2008 @ 3:45pm i just had a relisten and i think i lose it a bit near the back end of the tune ... |
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| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Teblchple7 replied on Sat Sep 6, 2008 @ 8:38pm |
| Coolness: 44505 | I like the first version better.
The second version introduces Rocky horn stabs and mysterio chimes which has been done to death already by many others for many years. This is too cliché. And the context is quite sloppy. It's like you had a good stir fry going but you were bored so kept piling in the ingredients to entertain yourself, ruining dinner. The first version has a really cool sub-bass intro, short and sweet, which leads to a heavy bass countdown and really cool sluggish drum patterns. It was foreshadowed, yet still unexpected. Then that heavy bass counts like 'for whom the bell tolls' and delivers a change at exactly the spot were you can't take it anymore. It got the finger point from me. The same note, over and over, but a change exactly when you are overwhelmed. That happens several times in the track, and delivered every-time. That was something to work with. That was the good stuff for me. The new version puts that all to the back and says 'HORNS AND CHIMES! oh and this other stuff too...' The first cut had finesse, the second one seems self-indulgent and out of context. Falls under 'No, no, what are you doing?!' from me. Keep the first track, exactly as is (fix the phasing problems, beef up the sounds a bit)... then at 2:17 when it ends, you can bring in your horns or whatever. The 2:17 version is good now. You can extend it to 4 minutes by introducing stuff AFTER. Not at the start, changing the whole vibe. :( |
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| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» PonChalice replied on Sat Sep 6, 2008 @ 9:23pm |
| Coolness: 76485 | lol, you're right... i thought the other version was a little repetitive and tried to change it up.
a bit to much. i get your point about the loss of tension. i'll try another mixdown, peel away some layers Update » PonChalice wrote on Sat Sep 6, 2008 @ 11:24pm ... dubstep 10 a ?
[ www.divshare.com ] its good that i went back on this one, i like this version much more |
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| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Teblchple7 replied on Sun Sep 7, 2008 @ 1:13am |
| Coolness: 44505 | Nice tune!
You need to beef up the final now. Not the best mastering suite nowadays, people use WAVES and Iztope Ozone now, but run the final through T-Racks if you have it. [ www.t-racks.com ] Start with preset -> Suite -> Regular #1 and tweak from there. I ran the MP3 through it and it got a lot tougher. |
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| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» PonChalice replied on Sun Sep 7, 2008 @ 1:21am |
| Coolness: 76485 | cool, i'll try it |
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