I was told to post this in here instead.

hello all, I have been producing about a year and i've near completed my first track.

Its a Trancecore / NRG Trance track at 164 BPM

I would love to get some feedback and comments. please let me know here or email me at rion.kr@gmail.com

please download file here: (right click - save as)

[ rion.funkstate.com ]

thanks so much

ahh thanks for the info and the feedback, I'll try to move it there now!

I wasnt going to comment but then I saw this video
and my conclusion is that this guy:

DJneoform

it the bigest fucking retarded no mind on the planet. I think his homo picture indicates that already though.

a more suitable name would be DJ-NO-form

you think possibly all those guys in trucks and without shirts are all rapists? WOW you father must have beat you silly when you were a young loser (or you actualy didnt watch the video, but i think its the "father beating loser" reason), for you to come up with that ill-witted observation.

I'm sorry your father beat his loser son. Of course that only indicates that your father is also a loser. Your poor mother, the queen of a loser family.

those horrible acts on the other side of the planet do not warrent any justification!!!!


"compaired to north korea, they're doing great" who told you that? CNN?

Please critique my first track...

hello all, I have been producing about a year and i've near completed my first track.

Its a Trancecore / NRG Trance track at 164 BPM

I would love to get some feedback and comments. please let me know here or email me at rion.kr@gmail.com

please download file here: (right click - save as)

[ rion.funkstate.com ]

thanks so much