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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» DjDrift replied on Tue Dec 18, 2007 @ 10:24am
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This is the link of my first production... it's not done yet, but it's a good idea of what it should sounds like when it will be!

Frank
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Deadfunk replied on Tue Dec 18, 2007 @ 11:42am
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first of all, good job. for a first track its pretty nice. i dont know wich genre you wanted to create, i can tell by my personal tastes that it sounds like 80's new wave/ 80's pop dance, because of the bassline, the drums and the lead sound

pros: the melody is catchy, which is really nice, but it does remind me of an old trance track
the pad sounds nice
the overall structure/automations are well done.

cons: we dont hear your kick at all, if there is one.
you sometime have to stop your melodic parts, because they will loose their greatness when repeated and repeated without end.
your crash is too loud, and i personally hate that crash sound, but thats personal
try to do more loops with your drum, more than a 16 beat loop, it sounds repetitive too much

keep em coming, were not all bitchy!
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» DjDrift replied on Tue Dec 18, 2007 @ 11:26pm
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Thank you very much! That's exactly the kind of advice I want to have! I'll try to check those things. I'm not really good with drum loop (that's my nightmare haha) and the mastering part is also a problem for me. Like having more "Punchy" kick!

Well thank you for your comments! It's really appreciated!

Frank
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Br34th3 replied on Wed Dec 19, 2007 @ 2:39am
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although a tad short I see potential.. must agree with deadfunk on the crash... wayy too *insert critical catch-term of the hour here* .. other than that, with a massive dirty-ass bassline(artformofthecentury) this could be a killer.. the melody alone speaks for itself...emotion is what its all about... keep it up!.. -peace
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